如何写劝说性建议信
【审题要素】
写作时应注意下面几点:
1. 确定文体:这是一篇应用文,是学生熟悉的书信,写作中应注意书信的常规格式。
2. 主体时态:文章应以一般现在时为主。
3. 主体人称:由于是给别人提出建议,所以人称应该以第二人称为主。
4. 内容要点:①问题介绍;②建议一;③建议二;④建议三;⑤我的愿望。
5. 注意恰当使用连接词,使各个要点之间逻辑连贯,行文通顺。
【思路引导】
首先,回应来信中提出的问题,并分析原因。
其次,针对该问题,提出2-3条合理的建议并说明理由。
Ideas |
Why |
1. to ask people their likes and dislikes |
1. to find classmates with the same interests |
2. to join in discussions and show interest in other people’s ideas |
2. to get to know different people and let them see you are friendly |
3. ... |
3. ... |
最后,写一两句结束语,如:希望我的建议对你有帮助等等。
【语言积累】
1. Introduction:
I’m sorry (that) you are having trouble / difficulty / problems in making friends.
I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely.
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on ...
However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you. / Here are a few suggestions.
I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.
2. Ideas & Reasons:
First(ly), why not ...? If you do this, ...
Secondly, you should / can ... Then / That way, ...
Thirdly, it would be a good idea if ... By doing this, ...
Last but not least (最后但并不是最不重要的) ...
3. Conclusion:
I hope you will find these ideas useful.
As time goes on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can follow the above.
I hope what’s mentioned above might be helpful ...
I believe that if you follow my advice, you’ll get along well with your classmates.
I believe, with your determination, you can manage to overcome these difficulties.
【参考范文】
Dear Xiao Dong,
I’m sorry you are having trouble in making friends. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you.
Firstly, why not take an active part in discussions? If you do this, you can express your own opinions, and at the same time, learn to listen to other people’s views.
Secondly, you should learn about your classmates’ likes and dislikes. Then you can find common interests with them. In this way, you can get to know more different people and show them that you are friendly.
Last but not least, I’m always here ready to help. We can take part in some activities together and I can introduce you to others.
I hope you will find these ideas useful.
Yours sincerely,
Miss Wang
通过学习这篇写作指导,你掌握了如何写劝说性建议信的方法了吗?试着写一下吧,然后与范文加以对照,找出其中的不足并加以改进。
GUIDED WRITING
我们为什么要学英语?
【审题要素】
根据海报所写的短文要求针对某个现象(或问题)发表自己的观点并陈述理由。从文体上看,属于议论文范畴。提笔前需考虑哪个观点或理由有更多的内容可写。此外,此类文章常常谈论的是现在的情况,所以时态应用一般现在时。行文类似于英语演讲稿的形式,所以主体人称应为第一人称。
【思路引导】
第一步:先设计“Why should we learn English?”的海报。海报的写作方式如下:
1. Why should we learn English? 作标题,位于海报的正中间。
2. 接下来列出学英语的理由(可与同学讨论,多列几条)。
3. 最后写结论。
第二步:根据海报内容所写的短文属于议论文。此类文章谋篇布局时应注意以下几个步骤:
1. 开门见山提出问题或看法。
2. 列出至少三条合理的理由或原因(根据海报所给要点来写)。
3. 作出总结,呼应首段(也可提出个人观点及理由)。
【海报写作的注意事项】
1. 英文海报主题应该明确、一目了然。它的内容简明扼要,形式新颖美观。海报要求用最少的文字包含最多的信息,因此海报多用省略句、缩略语、短语等等。
2. 为进一步增强海报的醒目性,一些重要信息常常分行来写,并且在其前面用粗点、星号等特殊符号加以强调,有时还配有图片以增加吸引力。
【议论文写作常用表达】
As a student, I am strongly in favor of the decision. (表明自己的观点)
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下)
First of all, ... Secondly, ... Besides, ... (列出2-3个赞成或反对的理由)
In conclusion, I believe that ... (结论)
【参考范文】
1. Poster
WHY SHOULD WE LEARN ENGLISH?
Reasons for learning English:
★one of the main international official languages
★to talk to native speakers
★to read English books
★widely used in most countries
★one of the main subjects in exams
★important in international business
So learning English is important, and we should try our best to master it.
2. One possible version:
Why should we learn English?
InChinanearly every student learns English but it is still worth asking — why? There are many reasons.
English is important to a successful education; it is almost impossible to get into a key university without a high standard in English. In addition, English is now the language of the business world so an ability to speak and write English fluently is important to one’s career. A third reason is that there are many beautiful works of literature written in English, which can give the reader a great deal of pleasure.
There is no doubt that learning English is important and we should try our best to master it.
通过学习这篇写作指导,你掌握了英语海报及议论文的写作方法了吗?试着写一下吧,然后与范文加以对照,找出其中的不足并加以改进。